I will love you tell I die
The moment I met you I knew,
you would always hold a special place in my heart.
I kept on telling myself that nothing could tear our freindship apart,
Everything god has made is such precious art, and to me you are a mona lisa.
I miss the way you could make my day brighter by just one smile,
I miss the way I could never tell a lie to you.
I need you, like a flower needs water,
To me nobody's touch has ever been softer.
Now I have not seen you for a while,
the pain in my soul bores new festations everyday.
If I could just speak to you one more time, I would not know what to say,
Because the way I feel about you can not be explained merely with just words.
I long to see you again oneday,
I pray that you realize that for you the debt jesus paid.
I know your feelings for me have not gone astray,
If you coud know just one thing about my love for you, I will love you tell I die.
jesse

I liked it, not sure about the jesus debt line? didnt quite fit for me that line, but loved the rest of it, well done
Hey guys, I am back.I know
Hey guys, I am back.I know this is an old poem, but I was wondering if you could give me your thoughts about it.


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