"ADORATION FOR AMAJA"Thought#1

What is it that attracts me towards you?
could it be your angelic face? your hair? your lips?
or maybe it is every word that comes out of your mouth wich seems to have been taken from the breath of ANGELS themselves, because upon the hearing of such sounds one seems to be directed towards heaven itself.........could it be the luster in your eyes? A VISION OF MISTIC WONDER, panoramic beauty from wich every reflexion becomes yet more alive....mirrored from your enchanting sight- the refexion, of the one who wants to see through them.
could it be the grace that adorns you, from the bottom of your feet to the tip of your head? That ciluette? That ciluette that maps and captures your every single curve, your every single emotion, CONCENTRATED! out of charm itself...the concentration of dazzling and mesmerizing- RADIATES! out of every inch of your body.
Could it be the fondness of your heart? The heart that YEARNS! to FEEL! and emotion so exiting!
That rushes! that overwhelms! that takes over! that will burn through your skin- as an immense desire to feel alive, to feel as if the world had spun- feelings never once felt before that are reborn and stay forever young, giving you the reassurance that never again your heart will flag for love, tenderness or a state of wellbeing, for as "YOU" the provider of bliss will brisk some off, onto whom your site gives the priviledge to be seen by.
Skin deep! much like your beauty.....my lady, that no poetic trends will well define what you with such ease are, Perpetual beauty....Poetry in motion.... you are a poetry master piece......should you just be framed, infallible notion? can more words be created to define your beauty? Or were colerful discriptions created with your presence in mind? 'cause let me tell you, that none of these could ever encapture all of your luster, and why would they? if the origin of them all is you.

p.s if you would like to read more of my work you can go to
www.poetrypoem.com/4everromantic2u

In Eternal Dreams – Sun, 2007 – 08 – 12 19:16

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Thank you, you are too kind.

Thank you, you are too kind.

In Eternal Dreams – Mon, 2007 – 08 – 13 00:35

This is great

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You are a beautiful writer. It makes me feel what's in your heart...

Dawn Ellis – Mon, 2007 – 08 – 13 00:32

p.s if you would like to

p.s if you would like to read more of my work you can go to
www.poetrypoem.com/4everromantic2u

In Eternal Dreams – Mon, 2007 – 08 – 13 00:29