Making Love on a Cloud

White down beneath my body
you pressing me into the fluff
Etta James wailing in the background
and I can't get enough

Our sweaty bodies mingle
I taste salt upon your skin
You grab my hair and hold me down
the way I want you is a sin

I feel your lips in that secret place
you often call my sweet spot
You bring me to the edge of heaven
Yet I'm feeling so damn hot

My fingers hold tight to fluffy clouds
as you ease yourself inside
I feel your need and heed it
as I hold on for the ride

I wonder what my neighbor thinks
can she hear my screams and moans
Then suddenly I can't think at all
I'm caught up in your groans

You collapse upon me spent
and listen to me breathe
I settle into this cloud of love
And lose myself in dreams

Deborah Taylor – Fri, 2007 – 08 – 24 16:33

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like this!

I love the way you play words in this piece.
Very erotic indeed!

Lost Soul – Sat, 2007 – 10 – 06 17:04