VENUS WILL SMILE (SOMEDAY)
VENUS WILL SMILE (SOMEDAY)
Broken smile,
Heart…torn, shredded
Will Venus ever smile again?
Searching, seeking
For answers
Drip, drip
Felt the warm drops
Running down, salted tracing
Probing, looking
For redemption
Sweet drops,
Gale free beautiful sheets
Begin to fall…fall
Hoping, promising
That someday…
Venus will smile
Brille – Mon, 2007 – 11 – 19 15:02
nice metaphor
I like the way you play with words! Keep on posting...
Venus is just beside you reading your heart; be happy!!!
Lost Soul – Wed, 2007 – 11 – 21 01:44


Recent comments
3 hours 32 min ago
4 hours 10 min ago
15 hours 17 min ago
15 hours 19 min ago
16 hours 56 min ago
1 day 8 hours ago
1 day 17 hours ago
1 day 23 hours ago
1 day 23 hours ago
2 days 2 hours ago