VENUS WILL SMILE (SOMEDAY)

VENUS WILL SMILE (SOMEDAY)
Broken smile,
Heart…torn, shredded
Will Venus ever smile again?
Searching, seeking
For answers

Drip, drip
Felt the warm drops
Running down, salted tracing
Probing, looking
For redemption

Sweet drops,
Gale free beautiful sheets
Begin to fall…fall
Hoping, promising
That someday…
Venus will smile

Brille – Mon, 2007 – 11 – 19 15:02

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nice metaphor

I like the way you play with words! Keep on posting...
Venus is just beside you reading your heart; be happy!!!

Lost Soul – Wed, 2007 – 11 – 21 01:44