The Darkness and Light

Noruel's picture

I was keeping love deeply sealed within my heart
Closed with a thousand locks
Afraid to suffer once again

You came, you teared the locks apart
You let it escape, what have you done?
Is it my destiny to feel this pain?

But it's funny...

I haven't been this happy for some time
And it makes the world shine bright
For this feeling has two sides...

The darkness & The light

PS: I'm foreign, so it's really simple, but it's sincere

Noruel – Wed, 2008 – 01 – 09 01:17

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nice poem Noruel...... lotz

Geminni's picture

nice poem Noruel...... lotz of ppl here are foreign, non-native english speakers or something like that...like me =) keep on posting

Geminni – Sat, 2008 – 01 – 12 11:44

Darkness n Light

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

Lovely, i love it!!

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Thu, 2008 – 01 – 10 20:53

simple and sincere

I like the simplicity of this piece. The message is direct yet sincerity is much felt. Love is such... it brings happiness as well as "death" to our heart. However, it is a very wonderful feeling!
Keep on posting. Hope to read from you more...

Lost Soul – Wed, 2008 – 01 – 09 14:42

thanks

Noruel's picture

Thanks for the comment, I'll try to write more when I feel inspired. :)

Noruel – Thu, 2008 – 01 – 10 01:32