The Cycle

Noruel's picture

I'm a slave of my heart
following his whims
binded by his feelings
stuck on this chaotic cycle
of suffering and happiness
frustrated by failure
excited with victory
always unstable
always confused
always in love
and someday I know
It'll probably vanish
this feeling, all of this
will all be a memory
just untill love raptures me again
then the cycle restarts...

(It came out this way, very raw and spontaneous, no worrying with rymes too.)

Noruel – Wed, 2008 – 01 – 16 02:38

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I agree with Lost

Geminni's picture

I agree with Lost Soul....poem doesnt have to have rhyming to be a poem...it is constructed in lots of ways...for example like you repeat always few times,that is an element often used in poems,repeating to gain rythm,to establish emotion or something similar.

Geminni – Wed, 2008 – 01 – 16 22:34

nicely done

Poems don't necessarily have to have rhyming lines. Yours is done with taste. I consider it a poem as you do. Keep on writing and posting!

Lost Soul – Wed, 2008 – 01 – 16 02:59