forever...

Noruel's picture

is that an angel? I thought to myself as i saw you for the first time
my heart was beating so fast that I thought it would burst outta my chest
we talked for hours, hours that passed as fast as minutes
the feeling was mutual, we made our love vows and the story began

you were my soul mate, my everything, the queen of my heart
we shared tears, smiles, we've been through so much together
I'll never forget all those things you done and said to me
especially the last before you passed away "I'll love you forever"

(not too good... :/ what do you think?)

Noruel – Wed, 2008 – 01 – 16 03:51

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I like it...

Geminni's picture

its like a short story with a sad twist in the end.... I like it...

Geminni – Wed, 2008 – 01 – 16 22:30

Forever..

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

I think its beautiful

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Wed, 2008 – 01 – 16 17:39