*ANGEL ON YOUR SHORE*

Geminni's picture

Yet another lonely night since I lost you forever,
Still doesn`t sit quite right that we`re not together,
And no matter how I try I can`t escape that feeling
That I`ll see you around the corner and that I`ve just been dreaming
These couple of days that turned into weeks of sorrow,
Everyday waking up wishing there was no tomorrow,
So I seek some comfort on that shore,
That familiar place that we both know,
Our special place on that shore
As if waiting for something more,
A sign of some kind, some divine intervention,
To bring you back to me without hesertation,
But I sit all alone feeling breeze on my lips,
Remembering how you used to touch them gently with your fingertips,
And I thought I heard your voice but it was just the wind
Playing games with my head as if I`m not sick of everything.
I just wanna stop and not go anymore
But I feel some strange comfort on this shore
So I keep coming back for evermore,
Thats all I got left of you,that is where I keep my soul.

Geminni – Sun, 2008 – 03 – 16 23:38

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Niko here :O)

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

I keep reading this part 2 piece as i just think its so moving and so heart wrenching, really great write you did here gem x

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Fri, 2008 – 03 – 21 18:55

aaawwwhhhhhhhh....Niko

Geminni's picture

aaawwwhhhhhhhh....Niko thanx......

Geminni – Sat, 2008 – 03 – 22 10:09

gemmini x

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

Like it? I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it x

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Mon, 2008 – 03 – 17 22:59

U like it Niko?

Geminni's picture

Im glad....I used few bits of story from your poem just in my way...in a way that maybe there is something there or its just an imagination....a possibility....but I upgraded your story a lil...turns up that angel was someone he knew and lost...I like the connected story kind of thing....

Geminni – Mon, 2008 – 03 – 17 22:30

like this!

I am impressed on the way you express your feelings on this piece, Gemini. A picturesque!

Lost Soul – Mon, 2008 – 03 – 17 16:22

thanx Lost Soul....well I

Geminni's picture

thanx Lost Soul....well I have to thank Niko...she gave me inspiration for this poem...and its a diferent point of view to her version....

Geminni – Mon, 2008 – 03 – 17 22:32

Re Angel II............ Gems .........

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

Oh wow Geminni, i love it!!Its soooo beautiful, such a wonderful response to an angel... really beautiful, thankyou... we are a good team lol xx :O)

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Mon, 2008 – 03 – 17 13:30

Angel

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

Just read it again.. i really love it, so touching..

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Mon, 2008 – 03 – 17 13:35

NIkoooooooooo......Angel on your shore

Geminni's picture

Here it is....I hope you like it....I`m not shure that I`m satisfied with it...but I`ll leave it up to you.....

Geminni – Sun, 2008 – 03 – 16 23:40