I Love You - (I do!)

Hold not back as these words reach for your heart;
Let the words work more than their usual worth;
Drink, let the taste linger, goodness impart;
Let your mind be led where words walk earth,
Leap rivers and oceans and become dreams,
Ride the romance, dance in candlelight,
Let words join breast and chest under moonbeams,
Say my name as I say yours holding tight,
Let my name enter as yours enters me.
Hold not back as these words reach every part,
Let the words work more than the melody
As words enter and excite and good-love impart.
Let the words of my mouth, my pen, my all,
Every letter, every sound, win your soul.

David A. Doolan – Mon, 2008 – 03 – 17 14:19

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great love poem

this poem is one of my favorites....=)
http://hubpages.com/hub/Lovea-poem

emmanuelc – Wed, 2008 – 04 – 09 20:46

nice one

wow pll

mjh – Mon, 2008 – 04 – 07 14:59

sweet..

Like this piece!

Julianne – Thu, 2008 – 04 – 03 15:14

david

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

and what does purrrr mean? , im curious??

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Thu, 2008 – 03 – 20 20:22

purrrrrrrr

^ ^
>oo

David A. Doolan – Thu, 2008 – 03 – 27 13:42

Nice work

purrrrrrrrr

David A. Doolan – Thu, 2008 – 03 – 20 14:08

Nice work David..... Let my

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Nice work David.....
Let my name enter as yours enters me.
Hold not back as these words reach every part,
Let the words work more than the melody
As words enter and excite and good-love impart.
........this is my fav part..............

Geminni – Wed, 2008 – 03 – 19 03:27