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My heart has been broken
Over and over again.
It feels like shattered glass,
Piercing from within.

I feel like it's being played with
Like a new videogame.
One minute she's happy, then mad, then happy again,
Then the next week she'll be the same.

Every girl I've been with
Ended up breaking my heart.
I thought this one would be different,
But I can see it's beginning to start.

I promised myself
I would never disrespect a woman.
But if they think they can take my sensitivity for granted
They got another thing comin'.

And still, til this day,
My heart remains shattered
Sitting there waiting,
For my true love to put it back together.

tdj_2010 – Fri, 2008 – 03 – 21 18:01
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Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

good piece, i have a theory that some people we are with in life are just the stepping stones we have to go across until we meet the true love who is meant to be ours, at that point- the stones stop and love is found.

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Sat, 2008 – 03 – 22 19:07
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Nice one TDJ....

Geminni's picture

Like Lost Soul said...it has a rhythm...it has a good theme thats developing...its a good poem...

Geminni – Sat, 2008 – 03 – 22 10:22
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keep posting!

There is rhythm. Nice flow of thoughts and trope. You do rap?

Lost Soul – Sat, 2008 – 03 – 22 00:30
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No i dont rap but thanx for

tdj_2010's picture

No i dont rap but thanx for the comment =?W#Y D() F()()l$ F@ll In Lu\/?=

tdj_2010 – Mon, 2008 – 03 – 24 18:49
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Wat u think?

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I'd like you all to tell me wat u thought of my poem...was it good, bad, in the middle =?W#Y D() F()()l$ F@ll In Lu\/?=

tdj_2010 – Fri, 2008 – 03 – 21 18:03
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