Going To Work

jgrubbs832's picture

I shuffled into the room slowly
Gathering myself as I advanced
I looked around the room quickly
Like my vision had been enhanced
Spotted her in a small dinged room
Through a small window of glass
Then I was stopped dead in my tracks
Cause I had to look at her ass

Somewhere after that I went nuts
I know that I lost my mind
Just about jumped through the wall
From looking at her behind
So I started a humming a short tune
As I kept walking along
Thinking of the words I could say
And how not to say them wrong

Maybe I could tell her that I notice
I notice when she's not there
That when she talks to me I listen
I always listen because I care
I could tell her that she's beautiful
And that I want to meet her lips
Tell her that I would treat her good
I could write it on post it slips

I could tell her she makes my day
Makes my day with her smile
I could tell her that I really like her
I am the farthest from denial
Maybe I could show her who I am
Let her see the real me
Maybe I could show her attention
Then I hope she will see

Maybe I could do a lot of things
They just might do me right
Maybe I could show her some things
And take her out some night
I have to do it before she is gone
Because she is going away
She is heading off somewhere
And I know she won't stay

jgrubbs832 – Fri, 2008 – 04 – 04 20:19

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nicely done...

Geminni's picture

you should tell her......

Geminni – Tue, 2008 – 04 – 29 08:45

narrative

I like the flow of your thoughts here. Keep on posting!

Lost Soul – Wed, 2008 – 04 – 09 00:19

Thanks

jgrubbs832's picture

Thank You!

jgrubbs832 – Sun, 2008 – 04 – 20 01:33

*jg*

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

This is beautiful, really liked it , Well done, and tell her !!! lol :O)

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Sat, 2008 – 04 – 05 11:40