Love and Hatred

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Where is your touch?
Can't I annul this feeling,
It was the opposite of hate,
And it was so strongly loved
Whenever I'm with you,
My love for you descend to something totally new.
I no there isn't any hatred,
I no that there is something called love,
I'm not sure if love is actually real until you know why you love that person.
Or else, they'll just run away leaving your heart filled with mishaps.
It wasn't my intention to irrevocably love you,
Someday, when I'm thinking of you,
I will want the sea to take me away,
To where the clouds are far behind me,
Where I will regardless of anything that happens,
Where I will finally feel your touch..

Monday Rain – Sat, 2008 – 05 – 10 15:21

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please take note

You used the word "no" for KNOW (second word of 7th and 8th lines) and denotes another meaning.

Lost Soul – Wed, 2008 – 05 – 14 04:43

nice

Nice expression of feelings. Keep on posting!

Julianne – Sun, 2008 – 05 – 11 09:42