Hope For Love

1. Can I see the heaven parts
When my Love departs
Can I hold you where you are
Its like reaching for a distant star
Where can I find thee
Come back home to me..........
2. My life is beautiful when you are near
When I close my I can feel the fear
That you won't be here when I open mt eyes
I hope that all of this are just lies
Free my spirit so I can feel thee
Soaring high, away we flee......
3. Take away the pain I feel
With our love that we seal
The magic is in the air
Take me to your secret lair
On the coldest winter night
I'll will hold you tight.....
4. You are my shining star
So near, yet so far
Now I can see the light
As it shine in the night
But it seems to fade away
Alone in my bed I lay..........
Aragon

couple of spelling mistakes, did you miss out the word eyes line 8?
Lovely poem though, i liked it a lot... very romantic...
B&L Sorry about that,

B&L
Sorry about that, heeehehe i miss that one thanks for pointing it out....thank you


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