Confessions

We have not met,it may not be.The distance is so vast and far
My soul has gone by Ethernet.To a land of blue and yellow flags.
Sent to an angel living there.In matrimonial harmony?
Olympic rings of differing hues,Join our spirits in unison.
Our hearts remain in other lands.beating as a single force.
To triumph oe'r adversity.
I want to say just one last word.Of my joy and happiness.
If I should perish in this land,Of heat and dust,rain and sun
It is a far far better act than I have done before.
My tale is told,the deed is done,truth will find a way.
Triumphant bells will peal,ringing out this day and eve
To tell the world that we have loved and lost.
Because we are NOT FREE !!!!!!!!
loved and lost

very good piece, i also like the last lines
confessions your comment

Thanks this was my first attempt on this site
and you have published what?
pharmacyman
This piece touches me especially the lines ".... to tell the world we have loved and lost... because we are NOT FREE!!!!" I feel your emotions here. Great!
comments received.

Yes my emotions were running high that morning,but have you read LILY translated by Lidiya and with my input.
Hard to follow but really good.
This poem is really great.
This poem is really great. She must be special girl if you wrote it.
your comment

Leslie thinks you really are that special girl !!!!


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