Confessions

pharmacyman444's picture

We have not met,it may not be.The distance is so vast and far
My soul has gone by Ethernet.To a land of blue and yellow flags.
Sent to an angel living there.In matrimonial harmony?

Olympic rings of differing hues,Join our spirits in unison.
Our hearts remain in other lands.beating as a single force.
To triumph oe'r adversity.

I want to say just one last word.Of my joy and happiness.
If I should perish in this land,Of heat and dust,rain and sun
It is a far far better act than I have done before.

My tale is told,the deed is done,truth will find a way.
Triumphant bells will peal,ringing out this day and eve
To tell the world that we have loved and lost.

Because we are NOT FREE !!!!!!!!

pharmacyman444 – Tue, 2008 – 08 – 26 05:25

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loved and lost

Nikoshiana Flowerday's picture

very good piece, i also like the last lines

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Wed, 2008 – 08 – 27 16:22

confessions your comment

pharmacyman444's picture

Thanks this was my first attempt on this site

and you have published what?

pharmacyman444 – Sun, 2008 – 08 – 31 12:40

pharmacyman

This piece touches me especially the lines ".... to tell the world we have loved and lost... because we are NOT FREE!!!!" I feel your emotions here. Great!

Lost Soul – Wed, 2008 – 08 – 27 16:19

comments received.

pharmacyman444's picture

Yes my emotions were running high that morning,but have you read LILY translated by Lidiya and with my input.
Hard to follow but really good.

pharmacyman444 – Sun, 2008 – 08 – 31 12:42

This poem is really great.

This poem is really great. She must be special girl if you wrote it.

Lidiya – Tue, 2008 – 08 – 26 07:44

your comment

pharmacyman444's picture

Leslie thinks you really are that special girl !!!!

pharmacyman444 – Tue, 2008 – 08 – 26 14:02

poem

pharmacyman444's picture

I wrote it for you only,do you not see the connections in the blue and yellow flags,you are meant to!!!

pharmacyman444 – Tue, 2008 – 08 – 26 08:09