i was about to cry while readin' this piece,
....it was a GREAT ONE
....it is really for someone like me who has BROKEN HEART
....huhuhuh, i MISS her -__________-

omg...I've written the same poem xcept the wording is different in some places....that is so creepy and strange..I'm still like shocked by it wow..I am not even bluffing so weird..I wrote it when me and my fiance broke up...broken hearts do think alike

It was fun creating it. I was just running the thoughts in my mind and when i read it again. I thought it was nice so i post it. I think my emotions at that time was intertwined with almost everything i have inside. fear, love, anger, frustration. hope, sadness. It is just a piece of my heart. :)

i like your poem it was really cool

very interesting piece...I like the word play....

I like the rhyme and the way you put words to express feeling! Thanks for posting and sharing this piece!!! Is this really classic?

intersting piece!