THAT THING

Submitted by simplybigme on Fri, 10/10/2008 - 19:53

I never thought that letting go would be something
I never thought that something would mean onething
I was thinking that the onething is my everything
then my everything seems to be nothing

I thank you for that onething
That was previously my everything
And now that i know I have nothing
It led me to realizing something

That everything would mean nothing
If that onething is missing.

Content Type: 
Classic Love Poems

7 comments

by Nikoshiana Flowerday on Sat, 18/10/2008 - 10:01

intersting piece!

by Lost Soul on Sun, 19/10/2008 - 09:49

I like the rhyme and the way you put words to express feeling! Thanks for posting and sharing this piece!!! Is this really classic?

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by Geminni on Thu, 23/10/2008 - 11:49

very interesting piece...I like the word play....

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by marleygurl18 on Sat, 25/10/2008 - 20:17

i like your poem it was really cool

by simplybigme on Fri, 14/11/2008 - 15:57

It was fun creating it. I was just running the thoughts in my mind and when i read it again. I thought it was nice so i post it. I think my emotions at that time was intertwined with almost everything i have inside. fear, love, anger, frustration. hope, sadness. It is just a piece of my heart. :)

Simplybigme is a lover not a fighter.

by j409 on Wed, 24/12/2008 - 22:49

omg...I've written the same poem xcept the wording is different in some places....that is so creepy and strange..I'm still like shocked by it wow..I am not even bluffing so weird..I wrote it when me and my fiance broke up...broken hearts do think alike

by ARTzeroEIGHT on Wed, 04/02/2009 - 03:48

i was about to cry while readin' this piece,
....it was a GREAT ONE
....it is really for someone like me who has BROKEN HEART
....huhuhuh, i MISS her -__________-

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