My Final Bow

adam starr 88's picture

Enter into my demise
I lay down to closed eyes
I turn to the other side
To keep the hurt I have aside

I try to hide from you
The hurt I felt, and Pain too
But I had a feeling that you already knew
The emotions I was going through

But still I refused to show
What you had come to already know
I can't seem to let them go
Even though the feelings tell me so

I wish I could tell you how I felt
Of all the pain that I had been dealt
I have too many problems on this belt
And my heart has already began to melt

It's too late to explain all the pain now
My brain is going insane and so I take this vow
I will maintain and sustain and will not allow
This pain to drain my heart again so I take my final bow

adam starr 88 – Tue, 2008 – 12 – 16 02:20

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Geminni's picture

Good piece Adam...I think you wrote something wrong in 2nd verse in the 3rd line...it doesnt sound good ...."But I had I feeling "
all in all nicely written..keep posting...

Geminni – Mon, 2008 – 12 – 29 02:36

bow

very good piece

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Tue, 2008 – 12 – 23 16:13

Hello

adam starr 88's picture

Hi everyone... I hope you like my poems and if you don't mind can you please leave some input... Good or bad... Thankyou

adam starr 88 – Tue, 2008 – 12 – 16 02:22