would you

Would you love a man like me?
True love is how it should be.
Best friends always, never to part.
Intimate desires, straight from the heart.
Walking side by side, hand in hand,
Two pair of footprints in the sand.
Restless nights when you are not there,
A day without you just is not fair.
Eyes that weep, when you’re sad.
A listening ear, when you are mad.
Loving arms, a warm embrace,
A glimpse of you, my heart will race.
Tears of joy, at your success,
Your life I pray God will bless.
Love, trust, and surrender all,
This is a must, or love will fall.
This is how true love should be,
Could you love a man like me

manonfireforjennifer – Mon, 2008 – 12 – 22 20:37

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mvvenkataraman's picture

The poem is absolutely brilliant
Placement of words is excellent
The contents are wisely relevant
How such a beauty one could invent!

Rhyme and rhythm are combined
Really soothing to the mind
Perfection in it I could find
Two souls, love alone can bind

The poem must be by all read
Then pure love will flood
Heart loves, guides the head
One must love before one is dead.

With best wishes.

mvvenkataraman – Sun, 2009 – 06 – 28 17:10