The Girl of my life
My love for you begins when I met you.My heart started to beat 24/7 for you. I knew you were the one for me.
You were shy you were hurted you were quiet you were alone and seemed to need someone.
So did I you were the person for me how did I know?
You were like a magnet for me thats the reason I came close to you.
You smiled everytime I came to talk to you.
You cryed sometimes of the things you told me that happened to you.We watched clouds passed by,I cheered you up and told you "atleast you got me..."We talked too together and we seemed to like the same things we had alot of things in common.We shared chemistry..We would be sad to see the day pass by and couldn't be with each other.
We walked together in the white sands next to the beach in the early mornings..
When you were alone I would say "boo" just to see how you acted.
Then I would hug you. And tell you were not alone..I would give you everything.What you ever needed and I would do everything to be with you I thought I would change all my money just to get to guts to tell you I love you but I was shy..
Then one day you began talking to me more and I smiled.We went to sit on the beach and watched the sun go down.Then I looked you in your blue eyes you looked back in my eyes,I holded your hand and I told you I love you.You were shocked and tears rolled down your face and you smiled,Then you told me you love me too.
But very quietly you began to blush so did I.
I gave you a rose and smiled,I said to you "My Love for you surpasses all the beauties of the world,The rivers that run deep in the forest,deeper does my love run for you
The clouds up in the sky,higher does my love rise for you
The oceans and the lands far and wide, further does my love reach,
My love for you surpasses my own feelings for you"
It started to get dark.
I holded your hand and told you "Come"We went to walk on the white sand slowly getting to your hotel room.When we we're infront of your hotel room I told you:I would do everything to be with you I would fight for my rights to be with you, to marry you.I told you I love you till the stars fall down,till the sun stops shining till the clouds fade away but you gotta promise that I'm the guy your gonna marry.
You told me "Ur the last guy and only guy for me and that you would do everything for me"And you just kissed me and I kissed you back then we hugged each other like there was no tommorow for us.You blushed and I told you:I would never wanna let you go no matter what happens in my life Your the girl that matters to me the most, your the love of my life and your my cure your my water your my love, your my heart your my doll my boo my life I love u alot your unreplaceable they cant be no other girl for me.Your the only person for me for the rest of my life.
JF
Well done on your work, for a 15 yr old you are doing very well. keep writing..:)
Ty
Yea.. I know alot of people told me to correct and stuff and thank you for ur comment miss.
il shall work on it and write another poem another day im only 15 btw and sometimes i get messed up with grammers in other languages cause i speak 4 and in dutch they say "U" and in english they say it You but my friends type it "U" so i kinda got use to it ..
il work on it thanks.
The girl
I think its very sincere and touching :). The english could do with a few corections though but a nice write.
Thank you for your comment :)
Thank you for your comment :)!
I'll work on the grammer
There u go must read poem :D
Let me know what u think please.. No copyright..

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