Lost in Me

As I look into your eyes I know what's coming next
You take me by the hand,
Pulling me into my room.
Before we enter I grab you,
Pulling you closer
I kiss you, I watch you
And I know you're starting to go.
In a moment your on my bed,
Pulling me down on you
You give me your neck.
Now I know your gone
I kiss your neck,
Your breathing changes.
You start pushing me
I resist and kiss you more.
You're lost in me
I move my hand down your body,
Your breathing quickens

tuckerj – Wed, 2009 – 04 – 29 14:38

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Nikoshiana Flowerday – Sat, 2009 – 05 – 02 11:34

I just was enjoying it so

I just was enjoying it so much ,had hoped there was more lol

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Fri, 2009 – 05 – 01 08:44

Ok

I'll work on doing better next time, just for you. :)

tuckerj – Fri, 2009 – 05 – 01 13:11

this should be

this should be longer...lol... i felt as thoug there could of been so much more to this poem....... very good tho. :O)

Nikoshiana Flowerday – Wed, 2009 – 04 – 29 21:21

Longer huh

I wrote this for my girlfriend and yes it was much more to it.
This was the better rated version.
So I shouldn't leave it to the readers imagination?

tuckerj – Thu, 2009 – 04 – 30 00:23