Lost in Me

Submitted by tuckerj on Wed, 29/04/2009 - 10:38

As I look into your eyes I know what's coming next
You take me by the hand,
Pulling me into my room.
Before we enter I grab you,
Pulling you closer
I kiss you, I watch you
And I know you're starting to go.
In a moment your on my bed,
Pulling me down on you
You give me your neck.
Now I know your gone
I kiss your neck,
Your breathing changes.
You start pushing me
I resist and kiss you more.
You're lost in me
I move my hand down your body,
Your breathing quickens

Content Type: 
Erotic Poems

5 comments

by Nikoshiana Flowerday on Wed, 29/04/2009 - 17:21

this should be longer...lol... i felt as thoug there could of been so much more to this poem....... very good tho. :O)

by tuckerj on Wed, 29/04/2009 - 20:23

I wrote this for my girlfriend and yes it was much more to it.
This was the better rated version.
So I shouldn't leave it to the readers imagination?

by Nikoshiana Flowerday on Fri, 01/05/2009 - 04:44

I just was enjoying it so much ,had hoped there was more lol

by tuckerj on Fri, 01/05/2009 - 09:11

I'll work on doing better next time, just for you. :)

by Nikoshiana Flowerday on Sat, 02/05/2009 - 07:34

:O)

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