I Gave up so much.
Just to hold you.
i walked miles.
just to see you.

you dont feel the same.
And i know it.
you dont want me,
as much as i need you.

i wake up in the morning happy,
knowing im going to get to see you smile.
your laughter,
is my antidote.

i lay down at night,
wondering if my wish of you and i will come true.
ive wished one so many stars.
ive walked so far,
i want you to know,
i love you.

i wrote this for the girl i like weve had a thing for a while and im planning on asking her out with this can you help me with it and tell if its good or ho i can improve?