Hello, and thankyou for your comments, the only advice i ever give to anyone when writing is to go deeper, when a poem comes to you, an emotion, a passion.. dont just write what rhymes or what layers the surface , go deeper, draw all the emotions and words you feel from your soul, always write from your soul & your heart. No matter what people say or how they comment, its your expressions of your soul . :O)

As I read others work, I seem to grade it sometimes, (not that I have anything that says I'm really qualified to), on how parts or all, are what I feel or what I have felt before at one time. Your work does that a lot for me. But I also wanted to say that I appreciate the way you encourage me and others that I see you have replied to. I appreciate the time you take to help us go on. When you do have something to say, it is always kind and thoughtful and I appreciate it. I know my work has room for improvement and some of my work I think is good as it stands. I understand that one must learn to crawl before he can walk, but I have started and am excited about the future. I have always had a passion to express myself but never thought I was getting it all out as I really wanted to. Now I think I can. Having people like you say nice thinks like you always do, makes me want to dig deeper inside and think deeper and continue on writing so I can help others and myself, to see the texture and color of life around me that I see and feel and experiance. thanks again. ross.

Wow! Excellent! Very nicely worded.