I'm old school so, for me poems have to rhyme, but if they don't, they have to have good prose. Your poem contains a contradiction: if humans are destined through/by/because of the actions of a third party, one isn't, by definition, in control of one's own destiny!

Dear coolguy_eugene,

What you have coined is true
Love is vast like the sky of course
The right time for love must come
Yes. Happiness is unfathomable
God decides our partner
A bachelor or a spinster
Is a partner to themselves
Our mind we must control
As an uncontrollable mind is a devil
Every word of your poetry
Is really applicable to my life
Your words depict the truth only
There is no second-thought about it.

With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,

M V VENKATARAMAN